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poem....10pm

Posted by thinkfast on June 13, 2004, at 5:16:15

you know you want me
feeling the urdge draw me from afar
the oportunity is available
take me, it's uncontrollable
am i not what you expected
i don't take you too far down
aloft for a while then back around
i'm not as good as what came before me
so leave me stranded in the cabinet
loathe again and stand it
i will show you reality
do my gestures help you listen?
distance the tones of the others
silence
voices
covers
glisten
drift my current, i'll help you focus
waves of intuition that make the will
what's down below
but what feeds the quilt
you know you want me
take me, it's uncontrollable
strained your pieces through solid surfaces
layers upon layers into eden
a glass of false infinities
uncertain
will we both disapear?
you can fathom without the other?


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