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candie cuts

Posted by Ivan Michael on May 12, 2004, at 11:03:24

the sweet taste
just a hint of flavor
that's all it takes
you try a little
maybe you didn't even want anie
it's so good
it's like heaven
everiething else passes for a second
you enjoy it and walk away
even so, you always come back
just another taste
but you need a bit more this time, just a bit
again it's a rush
later you want more
you taste, leave, repeat,
and repeat, and repeat, and repeat
eventuallie you need it. not a bit, but a lot
you crave it. you have to have it.
you can't stop. not what? what do you do?
you may not want it aniemore, this false heaven
but at the same time you do

that's why i fight. i've had a taste, but if i try more, i just might skip a few steps.


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