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oh my mirror....You took me in and I know....

Posted by Jai Narayan on May 10, 2004, at 20:59:02

In reply to Dream, posted by mirror on May 8, 2004, at 23:40:46

You poem was so wonderful. I really got pulled in and experienced my reality of what you were saying.
I think of our lives as they move so slowly through a day...
but really the exit is so quick and we can be out before we know it.
People are leaving in droves in Iraq...Palestine...Afganistan...
floating away in their spirit clothes...all white and filmy...the gossamer, the shimmer before the dawn.


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