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okay you got me

Posted by Jai Narayan on April 25, 2004, at 21:03:36

I am this potent woman with ample flesh
a tower of a woman
my bigness is sometimes my failing
Do I look more marbled than the mirror tells
Or is my vision clouded with the prophesy of the divine
I am just me
or so it seems
what is my fate
I am humbled by others who have gone before me
their death is like birth
so unpredictable
maybe a week late
or just on time
I watch the dancing women
their bodies so pleasing
they move with the rhythms
that quicken my spirit
I am ready to lay down,
my soul is so released
but my desire is to stay on
to have some more glee
why am I so enamored with delight
It might be my undoing
so be it.
oh my god, so be it
so be it.


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