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poem.....horizons

Posted by thinkfast on March 23, 2004, at 10:09:34

yet another dark poem from an obsessional mind...what did u expect? ;-)


my mind stays away
while i sit here
with nothing to say
lonely and anxious
finishing my day

what will come of this
relentless suffering
depressing subjects
seem so real
wondering, pondering
how exactly do i feel

can't understand
or explain this
if i thought i could
what exactly
would i have to say?
anyway

cancel all
reservations
lodged in the core
but again hopelessly
giving in
when i close the door

keeps me trapped inside
with thoughts
i've tried to hide
can you carry the burden of confidence
i can try
But just a warning
mostly it makes no sense

no one wants to hear
me go on and on
and on and on
about everything
in this nothing
can't bare it
must do something


writing
talking to myself
just takes it way
but, sh**
it's only temporary
closing in on sanity

can only go so long
without expression
tearing away reality
transforming
into obsession

let the muse fly
lengthening the distance
away from this place
Nearing breath-taking horizons
scenery i prefer
uncompromising


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