Psycho-Babble Writing | for creative writing | Framed
This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | List of forums | Search | FAQ

Dear dad

Posted by alexandra_k on February 2, 2004, at 4:53:55

I followed you with hopeful, adoring eyes
-stumbling and falling over myself -
(the world in brackets)

if i ever thought to notice the look in your eyes i would have averted my gaze

why do you follow me round, girl?
Why don't you join your mother in the kitchen?

plse
[i dont wanna be locked in the cupboard]
if im quiet can i stay?

 

Thread

 

Post a new follow-up

Your message only Include above post


[308405]

Notify the administrators

They will then review this post with the posting guidelines in mind.

To contact them about something other than this post, please use this form instead.

 

Start a new thread

 
Google
dr-bob.org www
Search options and examples
[amazon] for
in

This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | FAQ
Psycho-Babble Writing | Framed

poster:alexandra_k thread:308405
URL: http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/write/20040102/msgs/308405.html