Ok, here goes.... Poem in progress

Posted by socialdeviantjeff on January 22, 2004, at 0:00:33

This is a poem in progress. It is an allegory for something pretty personal to me.

RISE AND SET
Neutral and ordinary
And at times cruel in Paucity
The gray cold before the sunrise
Roses with thorns
And desultory thunderclaps
Give cause for disconcerting disquietude
The lambent flame
And the russet emcompassment
At cross-purpose bestow regret and discontent
With light touching a still heart
Giving of flight from catalepsy
Under such light and infallible river flows
Adverting to the bitterness
Too soon the sun surely sets

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Ok, here goes.... Poem in progress socialdeviantjeff 1/22/04
Re: love the top three lines (nm) thinkfast 1/22/04
Thanks! (nm) » thinkfast socialdeviantjeff 1/23/04
Re: u adding more to it? (nm) thinkfast 1/28/04
Yes, I want to hear more from you....nice stuff (nm) Jai Narayan 1/28/04
Thanks... Jai and Thinkfast socialdeviantjeff 1/28/04

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