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poem....correction

Posted by thinkfast on January 17, 2004, at 13:08:26

Clutch it
Silhouette of flesh
Spawning wonder
Force it
Penetrating
Deep within
Arresting under

Banished by chemical compliance
Stilling flight of light year insight
Superficial, shallow remedies
Immeasurable expectations
Captivating dreams again
The solitary solid one
Experiencing anomalies

Sensing controversy
Apathetic of black seas
Hypothesize the next
Leave the afflicted be

Bleed it
Need it

The scars, the flaws
Orbiting bodies again
Insignificance draws
Puddles in space
Follows a path
But leaves no trace

The pill whole and hollow
An evolved dulling through
All mystical ailments
To live in the world
You swallow

Not an avoidance
An adaptive behavior
Forceful instinct suppressors
Cleansing the instigator


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