Re: slattern

Posted by Zo on March 16, 2002, at 17:54:52

In reply to slattern, posted by trouble on March 16, 2002, at 13:10:06

I dunno. . .It's yr poem, my version doesn't work, but it ain't been run through your mind and your rhythm, but it might give you some idea. You'll like how it looks or not.
The visual shape of a poem is important.
Zo

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