Posted by Zo on March 16, 2002, at 17:42:59
In reply to this poetry draft fills a much-needed void, posted by trouble on March 16, 2002, at 3:48:37
Dear Trouble,I'd love to see that exact same poem with different line breaks, more words per line, to play on its story-like aspects--I mean, it has a plot, which is a very cool thing for a poem to have--whereas the eeny beeny lines suggest an airier form of poetry, to me. More impressionistic, while you are very much rooted in this life.
Zo
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