Posted by 10derHeart on June 21, 2005, at 22:34:40
In reply to Trying my hand at writing.. how is it?, posted by pinkeye on June 20, 2005, at 19:40:18
Like it A LOT...you put some effort into this one. Way to go!
I just have one complaint/comment...you were too nice. Waaay too easy on them as far as the harm caused by these brutal endings. I just kept wishing you'd let loose and just pour your heart out....
..but then again, that could be too upsetting to you at the wrong point. And I felt from reading that you were trying to mix some emotion with a lot of logic to GET the point across better, and you know, that's a good thing, too. When I write about it, I just can't help but go a little *nuts* because I am so upset about the wonderful people here hurting for NO good reason!
Just rambling. I really did think you expressed it so well. I just wanted to chime in and start screaming at the end, "Yeah...what Pinkeye said, and let me tell you all another thing....!!"
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