Posted by Emme on January 12, 2004, at 10:57:28
In reply to Re: I'll give it some thought » prozacpuppet, posted by Emme on January 12, 2004, at 9:35:59
It occurred to me that I didn't express myself as well as I could have. In an effort to remain consistent with the civility rules, I offer the following changes to my reply to Prozacpuppet.
> I expressed my wish to avoid oversedation. You seem to me to be so angry that you are not reading posts carefully.This may be better written as: I am not sure whether or not you read my post carefully.
> Are you familiar with any of the work documenting the the biological underpinnings of mood disorders?
This might be better written as: We know that there are biological underpinnings for mood disorders.....
> Again, you seem to me to be so angry that you are not reading attentively.
Might be better written as: Perhaps you misread my post.
> You are providing neither. You are not likely to find sympathetic readers here if you continue this way.
I hadn't seen the post further down where PP tries to offer advice about tapering. This might better be written as: This particular post provides neither. Other readers may feel put down if you continue this way.
> Have you experienced a mood disorder? Are you in extreme pain? If there is help that you want from us, state it so we can provide it. Otherwise, please stop being mean to others and respect our efforts to seek appropriate treatment for serious medical conditions.
Might be better written starting as: Are you in a lot of pain? If there is help that you want, please let us know. Otherwise, please respect our efforts.....
> I think your post is one of the most viscious things ever addressed to me.
Might be better written as: Your post makes me feel as though you are hostile towards me.
> Emme
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