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Posted by Angela2 on October 11, 2008, at 19:45:02
You Cant Be My Valentine
I wrote you a letter that said I Love you
I wrote you a letter that said youre my boy
I wrote you a letter all smudgy and blue
The kind that grownups dont write anymoreYou cant be mine, Valentine.
You cant be mine, you cant be mine
You can't be mine.
But it sure looks like you know how to try.
Posted by WaterSapphire on October 17, 2008, at 1:10:21
In reply to You Can't Be My Valentine, posted by Angela2 on October 11, 2008, at 19:45:02
Is this a mystery... I like the poem and especially the part about writing a letter all smudgy and blue. It is a great visual for seeing the poem in one's head.
Posted by Angela2 on October 19, 2008, at 19:08:48
In reply to Re: You Can't Be My Valentine, posted by WaterSapphire on October 17, 2008, at 1:10:21
No mystery. It's about unrequited love.
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