Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 854320

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Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger)

Posted by WaterSapphire on September 27, 2008, at 1:55:01

Your beautiful sister who was my best friend
Stopped calling two years ago
I remember that time you had wanted to die
This was something she let me know
When I tried to call her the line was no more
And I was too ashamed to visit her house
I figured she didn't want me to be her friend
So I became quiet as a mouse
Through turmoil over the two years my health has failed
And my heart has been broken enough
To my friend...
I never imagined what you might be going through
I had no idea how rough
When searching for you, I found your name
I found your space and pictures of him
And when I saw the Rest in Peace
My heart and eyes went dim
These tears started flowing like a river wild
I am broken and sad by far
He has only been gone for about half a year
And I still don't know how you are
I boldly wrote you a private message
And even gave you my email to write
Because I love you even if you are angry with me
And I found out that he died tonight
If you write me back, perhaps we can amend
Whatever I thought was not broken
There must be so much that you have to say
From 2 years of words not spoken
I don't know if he ended his life
I pray to God that was not the case
If there was anything I could give you back
HIS death I would erase

 

((((Watersapphire)))) (nm) » WaterSapphire

Posted by susan47 on September 27, 2008, at 9:41:05

In reply to Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger), posted by WaterSapphire on September 27, 2008, at 1:55:01

 

Re: Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger) » WaterSapphire

Posted by Phillipa on September 27, 2008, at 13:35:27

In reply to Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger), posted by WaterSapphire on September 27, 2008, at 1:55:01

I think I need to write you. Love Phillipa

 

Thank you Susan and Phillippa (nm)

Posted by WaterSapphire on October 1, 2008, at 12:15:17

In reply to Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger), posted by WaterSapphire on September 27, 2008, at 1:55:01

 

Re: Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger)

Posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:44:44

In reply to Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger), posted by WaterSapphire on September 27, 2008, at 1:55:01

That is a beautiful and powerful poem, I enjoyed reading it and brought many feelings out. Keep writing.

 

Re: Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger) » leo33

Posted by Phillipa on October 8, 2008, at 23:46:08

In reply to Re: Tonight I found out He died (suicide trigger), posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:44:44

Leo she does write wonderfully doesn't she (Watersapphire love Phillipa


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