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Monumental Rubble

Posted by Poet on June 19, 2008, at 14:46:02

Monumental Rubblw

multicolored granite monument
once engraved with the words self esteem
the years have not treated it gently
scratched and gouged
the letters scraped off
one by one
years turned to decades
half a century later
a faint f remains
no purpose without the rest
open to interpretation
fate?
fright?
fortune?
failure?
such is what is left
of a monument built
and destroyed by its creator

 

Re: Monumental Rubble

Posted by antigua3 on August 31, 2008, at 13:05:07

In reply to Monumental Rubble, posted by Poet on June 19, 2008, at 14:46:02

That was just beautiful.
antigua

 

I Agree, beautiful. (nm)

Posted by susan47 on August 31, 2008, at 15:17:04

In reply to Re: Monumental Rubble, posted by antigua3 on August 31, 2008, at 13:05:07


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