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i just don't know what to call it....

Posted by B2chica on May 19, 2008, at 14:19:22

i just don't know what to call it
besides me venting out...lashing out at the world and it's...

unknown

The thoughts and words tumble down
think the thick trunk dry
as it curls around itself to tell its age
it never lonelies with its leaves
except when they leave
when we disagree
the illusion of crazy
upon you and me
staring mostly at me
between the light
day and night
straight up
behind the bitterness
strike life
live the day
long
alone
right
crazed
dark
and bitter

Re: i just don't know what to call it.... » B2chica

Posted by Sigismund on May 19, 2008, at 22:19:30

In reply to i just don't know what to call it...., posted by B2chica on May 19, 2008, at 14:19:22

Next time I go to my doctor and he asks me how things are I might just say something like....
'If I manage to describe it, you will only offer me an AP, and if I fail you will just say that I am wollowing, so I don't think it's worth trying to put it into words.'

Alternatively I could say
'One of the useful things about these interchanges is I so dread them that I've cut my Valium dose so I only have to see you half as much.'
And he'll say
'That's good, then.'
And I'll say
'It's great that everyone's happy.'

Or I could thank him for making me so angry by telling me that I was wollowing that I was actually able to do some stuff.

Re: i just don't know what to call it....

Posted by B2chica on May 20, 2008, at 9:44:34

In reply to Re: i just don't know what to call it.... » B2chica, posted by Sigismund on May 19, 2008, at 22:19:30

ROTFLMAO!

you made me smile so much.
i love your responses.
i think i'll copy those and take them to my next pdoc appt.

the funny thing is
when i wrote these lines they had nothing to do with how i was feeling (i thought) they were just words that came out.
and i 'just didn't know what to call it' was for the title of the poem...
after i read your response i re-read my poem and it made perfect sense....
too perfect.
funny how the subconcious says what you did't know you meant.

thanks
b2c.

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