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Posted by Happyflower on April 28, 2008, at 7:58:18
Life as a voyeur,
Witness to the good and bad
Of human nature.Unconditional
Positive regard given
By a therapist.
Posted by Sigismund on April 29, 2008, at 3:20:08
In reply to Haiku-My Life-future, posted by Happyflower on April 28, 2008, at 7:58:18
If I knew the rules
To the making-haiku thing
Haiku this would be.Never knew the rules
This line could well be seven?
Maybe this one five?
Posted by Happyflower on April 29, 2008, at 10:33:27
In reply to Re: Haiku-problems in production » Happyflower, posted by Sigismund on April 29, 2008, at 3:20:08
I think it is 5-7-5,2 simple ideas that effect each other, but can stand alone in the stanza also.
Posted by Susan47 on May 2, 2008, at 11:05:14
In reply to Haiku-My Life-future, posted by Happyflower on April 28, 2008, at 7:58:18
Yes, nice, yes indeed.
I like it, Happyflower.
How real it all felt.There in his office,
caressed by his eyes, his voice,
his very being.
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