Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 817917

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What have i

Posted by B2chica on March 14, 2008, at 15:19:06

What have i

This world will never know
all you have, that i hold
deep inside, can you reach inside
it's not what i expected, i hide
i will not be all i am
all you want
what i have become
what have i become
thick black matter, creeps inside
moves from one side left, to the other right
shifting moods, like clouds shift daylight

on days like this, its almost hard to think about ending your life,
one thought said
one que read
one guide lead
one wrong tread
one life, dead.

 

Re: What have i » B2chica

Posted by Sigismund on March 14, 2008, at 16:42:51

In reply to What have i, posted by B2chica on March 14, 2008, at 15:19:06

Hey, that's good.

I'm impressed.

 

Re: What have i

Posted by susan47 on March 14, 2008, at 17:56:20

In reply to Re: What have i » B2chica, posted by Sigismund on March 14, 2008, at 16:42:51

Me, too, also impressed, B2C.

 

Re: What have i

Posted by B2chica on March 21, 2008, at 12:42:52

In reply to Re: What have i, posted by susan47 on March 14, 2008, at 17:56:20

ya, thank you.
i've been putting all my effort into writing as of late since i can't do much art work these days. (hard to find time to paint in oils with my littleone).
i'm starting to enjoy writing.
never thought i could.
but i just write what comes out...
it's just there.

as do we all.
thank you.
b2c.


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