Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 811591

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Backyard Lament

Posted by Happyflower on February 8, 2008, at 18:04:20

Backyard Lament

Distant mist of spring
Oppressing gloomy days

Graveyard remembrance of
Peppered poop stones

Crispy snow holds promise
With each step almost

Walking on dormant frogs
Spontaneous burial grounds

Koi pond tranquil mirror
Reflects the atrocious

Nature feels lonely
Until crocuses sing

Re: Backyard Lament » Happyflower

Posted by Toph on February 10, 2008, at 15:44:22

In reply to Backyard Lament, posted by Happyflower on February 8, 2008, at 18:04:20

That reflection could never be as harsh as the north wind. Be as kind to yourself, hf, as you are to others.

Re: Backyard Lament » Happyflower

Posted by susan47 on February 10, 2008, at 23:59:33

In reply to Backyard Lament, posted by Happyflower on February 8, 2008, at 18:04:20

Beautiful and perfectly spoken, Happy, and I'm there too, thank you for expressing it for us, in such an unforgettable way. Wow.

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