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dull aches

Posted by meeple on August 23, 2007, at 5:09:47

dull aches
longings
for a time past
distance bestows the past with a rosy sheen
laughter
kindness
companionship
distorting the way things were
reminiscinces
of something that never was
and the mirror shatters
the icy shards
put to another use
you can run but you can't beat time
it catches you smack in the face
the receeding past taking on a rosy glow
i feel old
aged before my time
old
gripping the icy shard
can't see me
can't see me
can't see mes anymore
just lots of reflections
each icy shard containing its own
version of me
all of them distortions
you can grind the glass to powder
but there i am
looking forward
walking forward
knowing something will loom
but there is nothing to be done
i'm not old
you need reminiscences to be old
and i refuse
i refuse
i won't
its gone
what never was was gone
if i had a heart it would have been ripped out
but i never had one anyway
illusions
illusions
illusions
what will i do with all these illusions in my head?

don't matter
so long as i don't contaminate y'all

F*CK YOU
I HATE YOU
*SSHOLE
GO TO F*CKING HELL

Re: dull aches

Posted by meeple on August 23, 2007, at 5:25:57

In reply to dull aches, posted by meeple on August 23, 2007, at 5:09:47

and how much more mixed could these metaphors be?
and what am i to do with this confusion in my head?

time is supposed to help.
time.
time the great leveller.
presentists think that the present moment is all that exists
the future isn't in existence yet
and the past popped out of existence long ago
the only reality of the past and the future is in the present
constructions, projections
frontwards and backwards
halls of mirrors
sick feeling
i don't understand
can i get off now?
can i?
please?
i feel a little nauseous
i feel a little ill
please can i get off now?
no no no no no
we are not friends enough yet.

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