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mr. shaky bones is calling

Posted by Jai Narayan on July 22, 2007, at 22:54:02

his staccato rap
has me rapt
I am fighting for my life,
mr. bones is calling
my spirit home-
he wants me to end this dance
but I want to make it to tomorrow
and dance on his- grave
notion of my life ending
I am, I am
will my "am" strength resist his pull?
I am Goddamn it!
let me be you devil of the underworld
I have earned this life
flickers of my aura
turn electric
I am
nothing can stop me now
I am
by god I am!

 

Re: mr. shaky bones is calling

Posted by scratchpad on July 23, 2007, at 16:45:44

In reply to mr. shaky bones is calling, posted by Jai Narayan on July 22, 2007, at 22:54:02

I love the fight in this poem.

sp

 

Re: mr. shaky bones is calling

Posted by Jai Narayan on July 23, 2007, at 22:41:04

In reply to Re: mr. shaky bones is calling, posted by scratchpad on July 23, 2007, at 16:45:44

> I love the fight in this poem.
>
> sp


I know what you mean, it's a never ending battle. We fight to stay alive and then we fight to stay alive.
thank you for responding.
Jai

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