Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 607866

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This thing and that thing.

Posted by James K on February 9, 2006, at 1:04:20

Sometimes, No time.
are just times. no thing.
Somethings, No one.
are just things. Nowhere
Someone,
is just a one.
Somewhere,
is here.

Anytime, Dead time
isn't my time. Dead things
Anything, Dead ones
means all things. Dead where?
Anyone,
can be no one.
Anywhere,
how about right here.

Re: This thing and that thing.

Posted by B2chica on February 9, 2006, at 12:11:29

In reply to This thing and that thing., posted by James K on February 9, 2006, at 1:04:20

this one is rarely made and makes me feel.
thank you.
b2c.

Take care youself James. (nm)

Posted by muffled on February 9, 2006, at 22:44:45

In reply to Re: This thing and that thing., posted by B2chica on February 9, 2006, at 12:11:29

Re: This thing and that thing.

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 17, 2006, at 15:30:44

In reply to This thing and that thing., posted by James K on February 9, 2006, at 1:04:20

> Sometimes, No time.
> are just times. no thing.
> Somethings, No one.
> are just things. Nowhere
> Someone,
> is just a one.
> Somewhere,
> is here.
>
> Anytime, Dead time
> isn't my time. Dead things
> Anything, Dead ones
> means all things. Dead where?
> Anyone,
> can be no one.
> Anywhere,
> how about right here.

James, is this yours? great poem...wonderful read.
Ja*

Re: This thing and that thing. » Jai Narayan

Posted by James K on February 17, 2006, at 16:40:57

In reply to Re: This thing and that thing., posted by Jai Narayan on February 17, 2006, at 15:30:44

>
> James, is this yours? great poem...wonderful read.
> Ja*

===Yeah, it's mine. I'm glad you like it, because I know you take poetry serious. I was experimenting with form. I was very down when I wrote it, but I choose to see hope in it now.

By the way, if B2chica and muffled see this post, thankyou for reading and caring as well.

James K
>

Re: This thing and that thing.

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 17, 2006, at 21:40:11

In reply to Re: This thing and that thing. » Jai Narayan, posted by James K on February 17, 2006, at 16:40:57

> ===Yeah, it's mine. I'm glad you like it, because I know you take poetry serious. I was experimenting with form. I was very down when I wrote it, but I choose to see hope in it now.

I am touched.
My poetry is an extreme experiment with form, just like my life.
Ja*

James K, I love your poem! Jai Narayan

Posted by Jai Narayan on July 21, 2007, at 21:49:20

This thing and that thing.

Posted by James K on February 9, 2006, at 1:04:20

Sometimes, No time.
are just times. no thing.
Somethings, No one.
are just things. Nowhere
Someone,
is just a one.
Somewhere,
is here.

Anytime, Dead time
isn't my time. Dead things
Anything, Dead ones
means all things. Dead where?
Anyone,
can be no one.
Anywhere,
how about right here.

Re: James K, I love your poem! where are you

Posted by Jai Narayan on December 7, 2007, at 20:50:25

In reply to James K, I love your poem! Jai Narayan, posted by Jai Narayan on July 21, 2007, at 21:49:20

> This thing and that thing.
>
> Posted by James K on February 9, 2006, at 1:04:20
>
> Sometimes, No time.
> are just times. no thing.
> Somethings, No one.
> are just things. Nowhere
> Someone,
> is just a one.
> Somewhere,
> is here.
>
> Anytime, Dead time
> isn't my time. Dead things
> Anything, Dead ones
> means all things. Dead where?
> Anyone,
> can be no one.
> Anywhere,
> how about right here.

are you still writing?

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