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Smudged Ink

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 20, 2007, at 23:11:28

I shuffle through my bills
and find a love note
on yellowed paper
with smudged ink
but I have no doubt
you had a steady hand
when you wrote this
my love for you burns
through this lifetime

Re: Smudged Ink

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 22, 2007, at 16:26:00

In reply to Smudged Ink, posted by Jai Narayan on February 20, 2007, at 23:11:28

> I shuffle through my bills
> and find a love note
> on yellowed paper
> with smudged ink
> but I have no doubt
> you had a steady hand
> when you wrote this
> my love for you burns
> through this lifetime

hey nice post. well it gets pretty haunted around here on PB writing. well don't it?

Re: Smudged Ink » Jai Narayan

Posted by scratchpad on February 22, 2007, at 17:38:18

In reply to Re: Smudged Ink, posted by Jai Narayan on February 22, 2007, at 16:26:00

> > I shuffle through my bills
> > and find a love note
> > on yellowed paper
> > with smudged ink
> > but I have no doubt
> > you had a steady hand
> > when you wrote this
> > my love for you burns
> > through this lifetime
>
>
> hey nice post. well it gets pretty haunted around here on PB writing. well don't it?
>
>

It's downright barren here.

And yes, it IS a lovely post.
Scratchpad
formerly ClearSkies

Re: Smudged Ink

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 23, 2007, at 13:20:16

In reply to Re: Smudged Ink » Jai Narayan, posted by scratchpad on February 22, 2007, at 17:38:18

> > > I shuffle through my bills
> > > and find a love note
> > > on yellowed paper
> > > with smudged ink
> > > but I have no doubt
> > > you had a steady hand
> > > when you wrote this
> > > my love for you burns
> > > through this lifetime
> >
> >
> > hey nice post. well it gets pretty haunted around here on PB writing. well don't it?
> >
> >
>
> It's downright barren here.
>
> And yes, it IS a lovely post.
> Scratchpad
> formerly ClearSkies
>

new name, I like it! thank you for responding, I have always appreciated your kindness
Jai

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