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Posted by Bobby on November 26, 2006, at 23:02:41
jimmy's sitting on a barstool
there was very little light
well-she's not Miss America
but she's the only girl in sighthe's living down at the Greenwood Lounge
there's a secret he's trying to unlock
he's living down at the Greenwood Lounge
where it's always 5 o'clockit's been a lovely sunset
up on Yonah Mountain
let's walk down-shake off the dirt
and drink from the magic fountainlet's go down to the Greenwood Lounge
where good times push and shove
honey, let's go down to the Greenwood Lounge
and spread a little lovedown at the Geenwood Lounge
the girls--they never have to pay
the young men chase the conquest
and the old chase yesterdaythey're all down at the Greenwood Lounge
where people lose their wedding rings
it's all down at the Greewood Lounge
celery and hot wingsI'll talk to Jack and Mary Jane
until my trouble ends
where the neon sun never sets
and make some new old friendsI'm going down to the Greenwood Lounge
and bid the blues adu
I'm going down to the Greenwood Lounge
and find another you
Posted by karen_kay on January 11, 2007, at 7:11:04
In reply to The Greenwood Lounge, posted by Bobby on November 26, 2006, at 23:02:41
it didn't bomb at all dear. the first time i read this, i really liked it. but (uh oh, a sincere moment) sometimes kk feels a little intimidated by people who write. (she kinda feels a little inferior in that area. same goes for dancers, all other artists, ect. shhhh don't tell anyone though, ok?)
i reread it. and it's really very good.
wishing she had some real big, smart-looking words to type,
kk
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