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Posted by happyflower on September 13, 2006, at 23:12:46
Penis In A Jar
Displayed sadly on the mantle,
Like ashes of a departed loved one,
A rememberance of corrupted transgressions,
Symbolizing the remains of 13 years shared.Once a source of enticing orgasmic pleasure,
Now a broken sword of painful dishonor,
Amputated, charged with a crime of passion.
No chance of parole, just awaiting execution.A limp piece of rancid meat diseased with
Horny toad warts oozing maggot infested cum,
Regurgutating the deplorable flesh within,
Until metamorphosis is complete.Unscrewing the lid, releasing a dark cloud of flies,
Taking flight, leaving me holding an empty jar,
Like my depleted marriage, like my void heart.
Wondering if it was all for nothing.
Posted by happyflower on September 13, 2006, at 23:53:59
In reply to Penis in a Jar, posted by happyflower on September 13, 2006, at 23:12:46
Posted by susan47 on September 14, 2006, at 19:21:53
In reply to Penis in a Jar, posted by happyflower on September 13, 2006, at 23:12:46
THAT was spectacular. Is it yours? I think I've seen you post this before haven't I. It sounds so familiar and it's .. awesome. Heh heh.
Posted by happyflower on September 14, 2006, at 20:41:28
In reply to Wow., posted by susan47 on September 14, 2006, at 19:21:53
Thanks Susan,
I have posted it before on another site(it caused a big stink) but I am not sure if I posted it on Babble. I revised it since then though, so this one is my final copy.
I always jokely told my DH if he ever cheated on me I would chop it off like Bobbit did, remember? lol Plus I used penis instead of a slang word because my DH hates the word penis. LOL
My T loved the poem, it certainly explains how I feel about my DH right now. I am glad you like it! ;-)
Posted by susan47 on September 16, 2006, at 2:14:53
In reply to Re: Wow. » susan47, posted by happyflower on September 14, 2006, at 20:41:28
I really do like it, and who Doesn't recall Bobitt? The way he made the most of his publicity was the eeriest thing of all, because I don't think it's that unheard of, as a crime .. cutting off a penis. And men do it to themselves, as well. Self-mutilation. Frustration. Whatever. I'm glad I don't feel that way about my vagina .. I love my vagina. I love my vaginailovemyvagina I Love My Vagina.
Hah. Sorry I changed the subject ...
Who turned off the lights?
Posted by Jai Narayan on September 21, 2006, at 17:03:10
In reply to Penis in a Jar, posted by happyflower on September 13, 2006, at 23:12:46
I was amazed.
You've got a well crafted poem.
Jai
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