Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 680318

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Another haiku

Posted by llrrrpp on August 26, 2006, at 17:09:40

Three posts is all you
can post in a row here in
psycho-babble land

 

Re: Another haiku

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 27, 2006, at 22:08:16

In reply to Another haiku, posted by llrrrpp on August 26, 2006, at 17:09:40

> Three posts is all you
> can post in a row here in
> psycho-babble land

and who's fault is that?
we can never point fingers
three posts make a fence

 

Re: Another haiku » Jai Narayan

Posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:13:45

In reply to Re: Another haiku, posted by Jai Narayan on August 27, 2006, at 22:08:16

> > Three posts is all you
> > can post in a row here in
> > psycho-babble land
>
> and who's fault is that?
> we can never point fingers
> three posts make a fence
>
>
The ethic of Bob
is that civility rules.
nothing else matters.

 

Re: Another haiku

Posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:15:07

In reply to Re: Another haiku » Jai Narayan, posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:13:45

And I think that your
haiku are so splendid. So
I wish you could.

 

Re: Another haiku

Posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:16:35

In reply to Re: Another haiku, posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:15:07

Sadly there are laws
Within these vanilla screens.
I cannot argue.

 

Re: Another haiku

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 29, 2006, at 22:09:50

In reply to Re: Another haiku, posted by llrrrpp on August 27, 2006, at 22:16:35

dear heart thank you for your response.
I know the rules so well.
they were formed after I had arrived.
so many can remember when they came into being.
Jai

 

Re: Another haiku » Jai Narayan

Posted by llrrrpp on August 29, 2006, at 22:16:55

In reply to Re: Another haiku, posted by Jai Narayan on August 29, 2006, at 22:09:50

Sometimes rules really
suck, that's all. I like this page
the best 'cause it's safe.

 

:-) (nm)

Posted by sleepygirl on August 29, 2006, at 22:18:14

In reply to Another haiku, posted by llrrrpp on August 26, 2006, at 17:09:40

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai

Posted by llrrrpp on August 29, 2006, at 22:21:38

In reply to Re: Another haiku » Jai Narayan, posted by llrrrpp on August 29, 2006, at 22:16:55

And it's so nice to
Meet you thus, Jai Narayan.
In five seven five.

:o)

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 30, 2006, at 20:44:09

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai, posted by llrrrpp on August 29, 2006, at 22:21:38

> And it's so nice to
> Meet you thus, Jai Narayan.
> In five seven five.
>
> :o)

you are a sweetie, thanks.
Jai

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai

Posted by rainbutterfly on September 11, 2006, at 4:33:24

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai, posted by Jai Narayan on August 30, 2006, at 20:44:09

and I am crawling
out of my angry cocoon
not dead yet - too bad

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai » rainbutterfly

Posted by llrrrpp on September 11, 2006, at 8:29:30

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai, posted by rainbutterfly on September 11, 2006, at 4:33:24

Rainbutterfly is
waiting for the sun to come
and dry away tears

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai » llrrrpp

Posted by rainbutterfly on September 12, 2006, at 0:19:28

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai » rainbutterfly, posted by llrrrpp on September 11, 2006, at 8:29:30

but its autumn soon
can butterfly trust enough
to see the blue skies

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai » rainbutterfly

Posted by llrrrpp on September 12, 2006, at 10:10:41

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai » llrrrpp, posted by rainbutterfly on September 12, 2006, at 0:19:28

And what if there are
no blue skies to be seen? Will
butterfly be lost?

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai

Posted by llrrrpp on September 12, 2006, at 10:12:23

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai » rainbutterfly, posted by llrrrpp on September 12, 2006, at 10:10:41

butterfly will soar
on, and she will find a place
where nectar is sweet

 

Re: Another haiku for Jai

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 20, 2006, at 22:04:21

In reply to Re: Another haiku for Jai, posted by llrrrpp on September 12, 2006, at 10:12:23

> butterfly will soar
> on, and she will find a place
> where nectar is sweet

where nectar is sweet
we sip a deep thirsty draught
wind from wings fans us



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