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Rejection (trigger...maybe...i dunno)

Posted by cloudydaze on July 20, 2006, at 1:23:31

Boiling tears of anguish erupt from my eyes
Utter defeat engulfs my soul
I try and rationalize with myself
But rejection has torn a hole.

I want to be loved
I want to be loved
I want to be loved

Bitter rejection – how I loathe you!
You tear me up inside.
I fear you more than I do death
But from you I can never hide.

I need to be loved
I need to be loved
I need to be loved

Your destruction rages inside of me
Breaking my steadfast will
Confusion latches on to me
And it holds me still

I cannot be loved
I cannot be loved
I cannot be loved

Battered, broken and sobbing
I crawl from the debris
I lost the battle with rejection
But the war is still in me.

Re: Rejection (trigger...maybe...i dunno)

Posted by rainbutterfly on July 21, 2006, at 8:50:11

In reply to Rejection (trigger...maybe...i dunno), posted by cloudydaze on July 20, 2006, at 1:23:31

Powerful, thanks for posting this..
rainbutterfly

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