Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 624621

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you're welcome to what's left of me

Posted by Bobby on March 25, 2006, at 20:01:04

I've been used and abused
i've been kicked and bruised
i've been shot and left to die
i've been asking myself why

but i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of me

i've been bought and sold
i've been hot and cold
i've been standing all alone
i've been trying to hang on

but i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of me

i've been the seller and the buyer
i've been the desired and the desirer
i've been told i've got a loose screw
i've been wondering if it's true

but i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of me

i've been here and there
i've been almost everywhere
i've been leaving things behind
i've been playing with my mind

but I've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of me

 

Re: you're welcome to what's left of me

Posted by Tanzanite on March 26, 2006, at 14:26:59

In reply to you're welcome to what's left of me, posted by Bobby on March 25, 2006, at 20:01:04

Hey ((((BOBBY))))
What a great poem and it meant so much.
Peace
Chelle

 

Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Tanzanite

Posted by Bobby on March 26, 2006, at 17:06:41

In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me, posted by Tanzanite on March 26, 2006, at 14:26:59

Chelle,
I know you're not in a real good place right now--so that is an extra special nod. I'm not good at responding to compliments--though I tend to seek them I guess. Anyway, I hope you are better soon.

 

Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Bobby

Posted by special_k on March 27, 2006, at 6:35:17

In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Tanzanite, posted by Bobby on March 26, 2006, at 17:06:41

:-)

I enjoyed it too Bobby.

Hope you know that the part of you that is left...

Is very special indeed.

 

Re: you're welcome to what's left of me

Posted by B2chica on March 29, 2006, at 9:51:42

In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Bobby, posted by special_k on March 27, 2006, at 6:35:17

ditto what specialK said.

i enjoyed your writing
keep it coming
b2c.


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