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Posted by Bobby on March 25, 2006, at 20:01:04
I've been used and abused
i've been kicked and bruised
i've been shot and left to die
i've been asking myself whybut i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of mei've been bought and sold
i've been hot and cold
i've been standing all alone
i've been trying to hang onbut i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of mei've been the seller and the buyer
i've been the desired and the desirer
i've been told i've got a loose screw
i've been wondering if it's truebut i've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of mei've been here and there
i've been almost everywhere
i've been leaving things behind
i've been playing with my mindbut I've never felt like this before
you're all my eyes can see
i've been passed around and more
but you're welcome to what's left of me
Posted by Tanzanite on March 26, 2006, at 14:26:59
In reply to you're welcome to what's left of me, posted by Bobby on March 25, 2006, at 20:01:04
Hey ((((BOBBY))))
What a great poem and it meant so much.
Peace
Chelle
Posted by Bobby on March 26, 2006, at 17:06:41
In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me, posted by Tanzanite on March 26, 2006, at 14:26:59
Chelle,
I know you're not in a real good place right now--so that is an extra special nod. I'm not good at responding to compliments--though I tend to seek them I guess. Anyway, I hope you are better soon.
Posted by special_k on March 27, 2006, at 6:35:17
In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Tanzanite, posted by Bobby on March 26, 2006, at 17:06:41
:-)
I enjoyed it too Bobby.
Hope you know that the part of you that is left...
Is very special indeed.
Posted by B2chica on March 29, 2006, at 9:51:42
In reply to Re: you're welcome to what's left of me » Bobby, posted by special_k on March 27, 2006, at 6:35:17
ditto what specialK said.
i enjoyed your writing
keep it coming
b2c.
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