Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 614624

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live it.

Posted by B2chica on March 1, 2006, at 11:31:23

take me to the hollow end
strapped beside this twisting trend
i find that life no longer bored
cannot and will not be ignored.

b2c.

 

Re: live it.

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 1, 2006, at 21:48:43

In reply to live it., posted by B2chica on March 1, 2006, at 11:31:23

> take me to the hollow end
> strapped beside this twisting trend
> i find that life no longer bored
> cannot and will not be ignored.
>
> b2c.

yup, you are one cool poet.
I choose not to ignore you...
god sometimes I feel so invisible.

Ja*, and fading.

 

Re: live it. » B2chica

Posted by sleepygirl on March 2, 2006, at 21:18:44

In reply to live it., posted by B2chica on March 1, 2006, at 11:31:23

I really liked that... a lot :-)

 

Re: live it. » Jai Narayan

Posted by Susan47 on March 4, 2006, at 11:55:59

In reply to Re: live it., posted by Jai Narayan on March 1, 2006, at 21:48:43

Don't fade, you're not fading, you're just re-energizing, please? Write us something...

 

Re: live it. » Jai Narayan

Posted by B2chica on March 6, 2006, at 11:05:55

In reply to Re: live it., posted by Jai Narayan on March 1, 2006, at 21:48:43

a strength of words like yours never is lost.
you may fade but you're still here strong.
you will reappear, you are not gone
you will not disappear.
your life won't lose at any cost
you will be still here living long.
your words aren't weak and never wrong.
a strength of words like yours never is lost.

i will forever see you.
strength is yours for the taking.
though your heart is sinking
your thoughts grow fast
you cannot act
you will bob afloat, like new.
...give it time.

b2c.

 

Re: live it.

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 8, 2006, at 22:49:40

In reply to Re: live it. » Jai Narayan, posted by B2chica on March 6, 2006, at 11:05:55

> a strength of words like yours never is lost.
> you may fade but you're still here strong.
> you will reappear, you are not gone
> you will not disappear.
> your life won't lose at any cost
> you will be still here living long.
> your words aren't weak and never wrong.
> a strength of words like yours never is lost.
>
> i will forever see you.
> strength is yours for the taking.
> though your heart is sinking
> your thoughts grow fast
> you cannot act
> you will bob afloat, like new.
> ...give it time.
>
> b2c.
>
sweet...
Ja*


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