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Posted by Bobby on February 15, 2006, at 14:46:09
I suppose this letter will be easy to ignore
now that you're far away
and I'm sure you've heard it all before
but it's something I've got to sayIf the world should end tomorrow
and time declared no more
I would only lose my sorrow
cause you're all I'm living forI never knew a love could hurt so bad
till the day you decided to go
and when you left, you took all that I had
now I just want you to knowThat if the world sohuld end tomorrow
and time declared no more
I would only lose my sorrow
cause you're all Im living foryou're the only thing I'm craving
you're the one thing that I lack
without you life's not worth saving
what will it take to get you backfor if the world sohuld end tomorrow
and time declared no more
I wouwld only lose my sorrow
cause you're all I'm lioving for
Posted by sabrina0805 on February 15, 2006, at 16:40:04
In reply to If the world should end tomorrow, posted by Bobby on February 15, 2006, at 14:46:09
I can't write really - but I can sing. So I guess that is where my creative streak kicks in. But I love reading "writing" and I always appreciate it, even if I don't always understand it.
Now what you have just written ......... hmmm .......... would make a really cool ballad come rock song that would be awesome to sing.
Wonderful writing Bobby. Truly!
Sabrina
Posted by Bobby on February 16, 2006, at 19:02:35
In reply to Re: If the world should end tomorrow » Bobby, posted by sabrina0805 on February 15, 2006, at 16:40:04
Thank you Sabrina. Sing away. If I hadn't found my old notebook, these would never be read or remembered
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