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Posted by Jai Narayan on February 8, 2006, at 21:50:20
A sparrow, from your mouth flew-
Mad rush of youth spent, I mourn the lilies
Their optimism, as your death is past due
A sparrow, from your mouth, flew.
Dawn’s raga cacophony disrupts a mourning dove’s coo
Abandoned meal of marrow & pungent green serrano chilies
A sparrow, from your mouth- flew!
Mad rush of youth spent, I mourn the lilies
Posted by Jai Narayan on February 9, 2006, at 15:16:15
In reply to Troilet: I mourn the lilies, posted by Jai Narayan on February 8, 2006, at 21:50:20
oh, and by the way this is an unusual poem said the echoing halls.
Alone again...all alone again.
Posted by Sabrina_0805 on February 10, 2006, at 14:11:01
In reply to Re: Troilet: I mourn the lilies, posted by Jai Narayan on February 9, 2006, at 15:16:15
Wish I could help, only thing is ... I understand the loneliness that you are referring to. Happens to me often!!!
However, a perfectly written, emotionally charged piece!!!
Sabrina
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