Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 600666

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ode to psychiatrist

Posted by omi1 on January 19, 2006, at 8:50:46

i wrote this when i was 14.

Don't look at me like that.
I see through you
and what you want to do:
Strip my mind naked
And lay me there.
Bare.
For the world to have its way with.
I won't let you away with it.

 

awesome :-) love that teenage anger (nm) » omi1

Posted by sleepygirl on January 19, 2006, at 21:51:58

In reply to ode to psychiatrist, posted by omi1 on January 19, 2006, at 8:50:46

 

Re: ode to psychiatrist » omi1

Posted by alexandra_k on January 19, 2006, at 22:29:55

In reply to ode to psychiatrist, posted by omi1 on January 19, 2006, at 8:50:46

hey i liked it too. and i understand the feeling oh yes i do.

thanks for sharing that :-)

 

Re: ode to psychiatrist

Posted by Susan47 on January 20, 2006, at 17:59:59

In reply to ode to psychiatrist, posted by omi1 on January 19, 2006, at 8:50:46

> i wrote this when i was 14.
>
> Don't look at me like that.
> I see through you
> and what you want to do:
> Strip my mind naked
> And lay me there.
> Bare.
> For the world to have its way with.
> I won't let you away with it.

Well done. It would've been lovely never to have had to feel that way, wouldn't it?


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