Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 589717

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FLOSS

Posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

I love floss
it is my new boss
I'd really like to get across
how much I really like the floss

 

that is the best poem EVER!!!! (nm)

Posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:18:01

In reply to FLOSS, posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

 

brilliant!! evocative!! poignant!! all that!! (nm)

Posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:19:09

In reply to FLOSS, posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

 

look at me- no floss! » sleepygirl

Posted by zeugma on December 17, 2005, at 6:50:12

In reply to FLOSS, posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

why oh why can I not share
The love of sleepygirl for her dental care?
Why do I stumble into bed asleep
My mouth uncleansed like a common creep?
Why does my dentist look stern and frown
On the color of teeth so mossy brown?
Floss, dear floss, I'm a bleeding mess
And somehow, that makes me love you less.
But if I loved you more, oh dearest floss,
I would even grin in front of my boss.

 

Re: look at me- no floss! » zeugma

Posted by sleepygirl on December 17, 2005, at 11:16:56

In reply to look at me- no floss! » sleepygirl, posted by zeugma on December 17, 2005, at 6:50:12

that was great!!! I want to frame it and put it in a dentist's office.
oh dearest floss!! HA HA! :-D

 

Re: look at me- no floss!

Posted by LegWarmers on December 18, 2005, at 8:39:44

In reply to Re: look at me- no floss! » zeugma, posted by sleepygirl on December 17, 2005, at 11:16:56

HAHA :) good poems you two!

 

We are not worthy...

Posted by Damos on December 18, 2005, at 16:38:36

In reply to FLOSS, posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

To be in the presence of two such extraordinary talents.

Between you guys and ClearSkies, cleaning my teeth has taken on whole new depths of meaning.

Thanks a bunch your poems were just such a great way to start the day.

 

Waterpik » sleepygirl

Posted by ClearSkies on December 19, 2005, at 17:02:39

In reply to FLOSS, posted by sleepygirl on December 16, 2005, at 23:16:40

Cascades of pointy water
Digging out the good stuff
Reliving a good meal
Saying a final goodbye to a bad meal
Out! Dammed spinach!!

Keep low to the sink or else
You get to clean the mirror in the bathroom
Again

 

Re: Waterpik- truly inspired!! wonderful!! :-) (nm) » ClearSkies

Posted by sleepygirl on December 19, 2005, at 20:28:42

In reply to Waterpik » sleepygirl, posted by ClearSkies on December 19, 2005, at 17:02:39

 

Aren't we clever? (nm) » sleepygirl

Posted by ClearSkies on December 19, 2005, at 21:14:33

In reply to Re: Waterpik- truly inspired!! wonderful!! :-) (nm) » ClearSkies, posted by sleepygirl on December 19, 2005, at 20:28:42

 

most certainly :-) (nm) » ClearSkies

Posted by sleepygirl on December 20, 2005, at 12:40:59

In reply to Aren't we clever? (nm) » sleepygirl, posted by ClearSkies on December 19, 2005, at 21:14:33


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