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Posted by AdaGrace on October 3, 2005, at 9:04:08
I'll love you if you will give up your pride.
I'll love you if you unbuckle your seat belt and continue the ride.I'll give you my thoughts written down with a pen,
As long as you realize you may never hear them again.
I'll hold you for a little bit, I'll caress your ego,
I'll give you satifaction and then I'll suddenly let go.I'll love you I promise, but you'll always wonder,
cause your soul I'll steal and your heart I'll plunder.I'll give you the feeling of always wanting more,
Forever and ever as you watch me walk out the door.I'll say the words, I'll talk the talk.
I'll make you want me, I'll show you how good it can be.Just remember that I call the shots.
I make the rules and I am in control.
I'll always let you know that
it's not my heart that you hold.You'll feel elation, and you'll feel tenderness.
But you'll also feel my control and you'll fell my cold steel powerfulness.You'll never know exactly where you stand.
But your heart will feel the brand.I'll burn it in, I'll make it sear.
I'll spit and stomp on it,
The charing in your ear, you'll forever hear.I'll love you like no other,
I'll give you the impression that noone else can.
When I'm done with you, there will be no other man.I'll love you baby,
I'll love you always.
Give up everything to me,
Turn over your independent ways.Give in to me, my words, my control.
Never again your self respect will you hold.I am the power, the blood, the superior being.
I am your nightmare, the one you cannot get rid of.
Your lover, your man,
the leader of your band.I'll love you, you know that.
You'll never be the same.
you'll never be able to sleep alone,
you'll wake up and call my name.I am your fantasy,
I am your dream come true.
Always and forever,
I will haunt you.
Posted by muffled on October 16, 2005, at 21:20:32
In reply to I'll Love You If, posted by AdaGrace on October 3, 2005, at 9:04:08
Posted by Shame on October 19, 2005, at 15:19:00
In reply to I'll Love You If, posted by AdaGrace on October 3, 2005, at 9:04:08
I agree. Very powerful. Well done.
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