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Chronological Heartbreak

Posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 20:21:25

Choking laughter
crying after
crystal rain
liquid pain

she's gone
I'm alone
time for mending
same old ending

dancing firelight
winter's cold bite
raining outside
raining inside

she's gone
I'm alone
time for mending
same old ending

colored flame
cryin shame
pouring down
frozen ground

she's gone
I'm alone
time for mending
same old ending

embers glowing
started snowing
water trickles
wet icicles

She's gone
I'm alone
time for mending
same old ending

Re: Chronological Heartbreak » Bobby

Posted by Susan47 on October 18, 2005, at 20:57:25

In reply to Chronological Heartbreak, posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 20:21:25

I love all your lyrics. Are they really yours? Yours?

Re: Chronological Heartbreak » Susan47

Posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 21:01:46

In reply to Re: Chronological Heartbreak » Bobby, posted by Susan47 on October 18, 2005, at 20:57:25

Sadly--they are mine.

Not Sadly, Bobby. Beautifully. (nm) » Bobby

Posted by Susan47 on October 18, 2005, at 21:30:51

In reply to Re: Chronological Heartbreak » Susan47, posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 21:01:46

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