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Love in vain

Posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 20:00:23

Tried to treat the girl so nice
but I was just another sacrifice
she wanted that man back, and I was the perfect fool
opening night, and I played the part of a jealous lovers tool

all that love in vain
now teardrops fall like rain
I tried so hard making it
just to find out she was faking it

Man, she put me through such agony
that girl's as cold as charity
she set a trap for him, and I posed as the bait
on a scale from one to ten, that didn't even rate

all that love in vain
now teardrops fall like rain
I tried so hard making it
just to find out she was faking it

she had a problem, and I was the solution
she left without a word of thanks, for my contribution
guess she figured nothing to it
some fool had to do it

all that love in vain
now teardrops fall like rain
I tried so hard making it
just to find out she was faking it

she went back to where she came
wish that I could say the same
she seemed to enjoy the show
but the ending hurt me so


love gone down the drain
now my tears, they fall like rain
I worked so hard making it
just to find out she was faking it

 

Re: Love in vain

Posted by Susan47 on October 18, 2005, at 20:58:49

In reply to Love in vain, posted by Bobby on October 18, 2005, at 20:00:23

That sounds like it needs a faster rhythm than the one below, the one below sounds like a slow rhythm ...


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