Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 567502

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save Me

Posted by Bobby on October 16, 2005, at 1:18:18

Yes, I have no sense of direction
the you see is just a relection
this story has gotten out of text
Scared to turn the page,
scared of what happens next

save me,oh save me
throw me a line
save me oh save me
from a life worse than dyin

you left me many nights, in hard driving rains
now only the shadow of a man remains
you in my life was my only care
how can you sit there calmly and say you weren't aware?

save me oh save me
throw me a line
save me oh save me
from a life worse than dyin

Life without you , is a life without meaning
I need your embrace, to keep me from leaning
you made game of me, left me caught in a snare
Don't leave me to perish, I'm gasping for air

save me oh save me
throw me a line
save me oh save me
from a life worse than dying

I thought I could win you with undying persistance
so far it's no match against you wall of resistance
caught in a raging storm, this man of straw
but it's all or nothing, I won't stand for a draw

save me oh save me
throw me a line
save me oh save me
from a life worse than dyin

 

Re: save Me

Posted by cockeyed on October 16, 2005, at 16:32:08

In reply to save Me, posted by Bobby on October 16, 2005, at 1:18:18

Bobby, oh, man, you are sick. This is a song.
You know, all that crap about lyric and refrain or whatever. "...you weren't aware." That nails it. Love in vain. Makes you feel real good...bunch of history just crossed my mind and I remember the b.s. of loving and pining. I think. So I gotta go back and start reading again, but guitar is a whole lotta fun. I don't have to type, just dance on the fingerboard. Sometimes typing these messages is nothing but a bitch. I wanna say something but don't know which.
Anyway, I blame you. going back to the guitar to sing me a few songs that have constipated my mind. Gotta do it. And saveMe did it. cockeyed.

 

Re: save Me » cockeyed

Posted by Bobby on October 16, 2005, at 20:01:56

In reply to Re: save Me, posted by cockeyed on October 16, 2005, at 16:32:08

As a matter of fact, most of these are written to be songs-- though I have trouble putting the lyrics with the music. Maybe my skills will improve later---they were written about 20 years ago. Thanx

 

Re: save Me » cockeyed

Posted by Susan47 on October 17, 2005, at 19:48:27

In reply to Re: save Me, posted by cockeyed on October 16, 2005, at 16:32:08

Wish I could be there to play along with you. Sounds like fun. Music Tinkering.

 

Re: save Me

Posted by Susan47 on October 17, 2005, at 19:49:15

In reply to Re: save Me » cockeyed, posted by Bobby on October 16, 2005, at 20:01:56

Sounds like you and Cockeyed might have fun together.


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