Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 563385

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October 6th (for want of a name)

Posted by Damos on October 5, 2005, at 18:47:03

Grumbling, growling
Screaming, howling
Scratching, clawing
Raging, roaring
Inside
Anger, hunger
Is it any wonder
Brain snaps
Thunder claps
Storm clouds brew
Blue, blue
Deep blue black
A big black dog
Riding on my back
Desolate, lonely
If only, if only
Why
Tumbling, falling
Crying, bawling
Hurt
Lost, lost
So very, very lost
Forget about the price
What about the cost
It's all too much
But it's never enough
And in the end
Who gives a stuff
Katrina, Rita
The second Bali bomb
So much pain and suffering
How long can this go on............

 

Re: October 6th (for want of a name) » Damos

Posted by sunny10 on October 6, 2005, at 10:12:02

In reply to October 6th (for want of a name), posted by Damos on October 5, 2005, at 18:47:03

much better than my attempts... reminds me slightly of e.e. cummings

You go, writer man!!!

Wish I was brave enough (or mostly just wish I was imaginative enough) to post something original here...

 

Re: October 6th (for want of a name) » Damos

Posted by 10derHeart on October 8, 2005, at 17:40:52

In reply to October 6th (for want of a name), posted by Damos on October 5, 2005, at 18:47:03

That was incredible.

wow.
wow.

I'm out of words. (yes - me!)

wow.

 

Sunny10 and 10derHeart - Thank you!

Posted by Damos on October 9, 2005, at 21:43:08

In reply to Re: October 6th (for want of a name) » Damos, posted by 10derHeart on October 8, 2005, at 17:40:52

I am honoured that two so lovely as you would even read my piece of piffle, let alone say such nice things about it.

Thank you both, big hugs to you

((((((((((Sunny10 & 10derHeart))))))))))


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