Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 561389

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Electric Pegasus

Posted by Atticus on September 30, 2005, at 18:59:34

Electric Pegasus flies
On a
Gas station sign,
No juice to light him up
And his
Pumps are long dry,
A myth of asphalt freedom
That’s just
Way past its prime,
And if you could hear plastic,
Then you
Could hear him sigh,
Once he used to mean something
That was
Sleek, chrome and fine,
A white-walled Greek chariot
Blasting
Down a white line
With wings forged from hot pistons,
Didn’t
Roll, it could fly,
Gasoline poets penned flame
Verses
On a paved sky,
And they quoted “On the Road,”
Proclaimed
Freedom is mine,
But they never did find it,
They just
Ran out of time,
Now they just ride underground
On the
Number 6 line,
Only chrome’s subway poles
They grip,
Deaf, dumb, and blind
To long lost and forgotten
Vistas
Forced from their minds,
Ask about their jobs and lives,
They’ll say
Everything’s fine,
Electric Pegasus
Is gone,
Left him behind,
But you can still see the worn
Sign’s ghost
Haunting their eyes,
The stratosphere once kissed them,
They still
Miss the divine.

 

Re: Electric Pegasus » Atticus

Posted by Bobby on September 30, 2005, at 21:19:38

In reply to Electric Pegasus, posted by Atticus on September 30, 2005, at 18:59:34

You are the man.
I'm just a visitor

 

Re: Electric Pegasus » Bobby

Posted by Atticus on October 1, 2005, at 8:21:32

In reply to Re: Electric Pegasus » Atticus, posted by Bobby on September 30, 2005, at 21:19:38

Many thanks, Bobby. I appreciate the kind words. Ta. Atticus

 

Re: Electric Pegasus

Posted by cockeyed on October 14, 2005, at 23:17:54

In reply to Electric Pegasus, posted by Atticus on September 30, 2005, at 18:59:34

Sorry but, oh my god, oh my god, ohmy god. Lord Have Mercy. But this is the stuff of Edward Hopper. Jeezus Jenny! I mean it is just plain damn good, Gonna print it if you don't mind. Wowie Zowie as Zappa might sing. But I gush too,too much. Heavy hitting, etc. Thanks, cockeyed.

 

Re: Electric Pegasus » cockeyed

Posted by Atticus on October 19, 2005, at 19:06:20

In reply to Re: Electric Pegasus, posted by cockeyed on October 14, 2005, at 23:17:54

Thanks. Slainte, mate. Atticus


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