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One more ring

Posted by Bobby on September 24, 2005, at 21:52:32

one more ring
andi'll hang up the phone
one more ring
and and I'll leave it alone
one more ring
and I'll know
and then I'll know
Every time call
the phone rings off the wall
but I keep on calling
thinking she'll answerone day
one more ring
is all I can endure
one more ring
just to be sure
one more ring
and I know I did my best
one more ring
and I'll give my ear a rest
Every time I call
the phone rings off thhe wall
but I keep on calling anyway
and maybe she'll answer one day
One more ring may not matter much
one more ring
cause I need to get in touch
One more ring
and I 'll know she's not around
one more ring and
and I'lllook for her in town

 

Re: One more ring » Bobby

Posted by wildcard on September 25, 2005, at 1:28:13

In reply to One more ring, posted by Bobby on September 24, 2005, at 21:52:32

Your poems are so touching to me! No words can explain....


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