Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 517553

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Twilight Zone Lover

Posted by Atticus on June 23, 2005, at 14:51:56

Day before yesterday
There was a time
When I slid along,
Stiletto-sharp and feline,
A hair-trigger pistol,
A hormonal gold mine,
A two-bit tomcat
Strutting in his prime,
A Twilight Zone lover
In decaying sunshine,
Watched day rot away
And I didn’t mind,
Never looked ahead,
Never looked behind,
But sidewalk strays
Can find the stars unkind
As the yarn of the fates
Continues to unwind
And the neon’s fierce shriek
Leaves them deaf, dumb, and blind,
’Til the night’s sirens
No longer seem so fine.

 

Re: Twilight Zone Lover

Posted by PM80 on June 23, 2005, at 15:28:50

In reply to Twilight Zone Lover, posted by Atticus on June 23, 2005, at 14:51:56

wow.

I have goose bumps. You are a really talented writer.

 

Re: Twilight Zone Lover » PM80

Posted by Atticus on June 24, 2005, at 10:13:23

In reply to Re: Twilight Zone Lover, posted by PM80 on June 23, 2005, at 15:28:50

Hi, PM80. Thanks for the kind words. Much appreciated. Atticus

 

Re: Twilight Zone Lover

Posted by cockeyed on June 25, 2005, at 1:07:07

In reply to Twilight Zone Lover, posted by Atticus on June 23, 2005, at 14:51:56

Atticus, Stop writing so well. I'm feling envious and put down and will report you for being uncivily good. cockeyed.

 

Re: Twilight Zone Lover » cockeyed

Posted by Atticus on June 28, 2005, at 14:40:34

In reply to Re: Twilight Zone Lover, posted by cockeyed on June 25, 2005, at 1:07:07

Thanks for the compliment. Much appreciated. Atticus


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