Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 518577

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hiding

Posted by cockeyed on June 25, 2005, at 8:41:51

hiding

oh god it's after me again so
I'm hiding
crawling back under the sheets
cowering away from life on the street
i'm hiding
can't face this radiant day
the nabors are all out chattering away so
I'm hiding
I need a cold shower coupla hits of gin
then I can sneak to the cellar and bury my sin
and keep hiding.
why in hell i can't face this day
my mind all squirrely screaming no way
so I'm hiding
popped from my hole crept here to type
to get this out
then
I'm hiding
'cause there's something lurking
behind my back
and I'm afraid to look
cause it's gonna attack
gotta get back
keep on hiding cockeyed

 

Re: hiding » cockeyed

Posted by ed_uk on June 28, 2005, at 5:42:16

In reply to hiding, posted by cockeyed on June 25, 2005, at 8:41:51

That was good! I like reading your stuff.

~Ed

 

Re: hiding » ed_uk

Posted by cockeyed on June 30, 2005, at 0:25:04

In reply to Re: hiding » cockeyed, posted by ed_uk on June 28, 2005, at 5:42:16

Ed, thanks. And thanks again. I just did a hatchet job on Atticus. I hate, no envy that talent. As for me. I'm really uncivil tonite because my 12 yr old grandson informed me that I was of no importance. I'm the baby sitter who ma and pa...no, upon whom ma and pa depend...wait til my dicky heart brings sitting to an end. Maybe I could drown the wise-guy creep only I can't catch him. But no need, I feel the angina creeping up on my poor enlarged heart. I may be an old f*rt, but I am still a nasty boy. Thanks again. This board means a lot and comments especially. regards, cockeyed.


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