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Was there a Fire

Posted by Susan47 on April 15, 2005, at 20:44:56

Burning in the grate,
did she meet you at the front gate
cocktail in one hand,
slippers in the other ...

or perhaps ...

You snuck quietly in,
and walked up behind her
as she stood at the kitchen counter (?!)
(subservient little wench isn't she...)
spoon in hand, and you wrapped your arms
around her waist and nuzzled the side of her neck,
and she leaned back and you took her weight ...

I have such dreams,
and they're so lovely ...
is anyone's life really like that?
Or was it just my parents .. for a short time
A time I never forgot
Things I replayed a thousand times in my mind
Things I wanted for myself ...

They lusted after each other
my parents
their lust for each other
precluded all else, children included.

Hmm.

Re: Was there a Fire

Posted by Susan47 on April 17, 2005, at 20:43:39

In reply to Was there a Fire, posted by Susan47 on April 15, 2005, at 20:44:56

Hmh.
You told me once
what fun it was for you
to be my age.
You were referring to
my sexual awakening,
the feelings I was having.

How lovely for you,
you bastard
How dare you fling my
aloneness into my face?

You had no idea,
had you? Completely
unaware you wondered,
why is she looking
at me
like that? Do you
really wonder why
I shut you down?

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