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One more before I am done

Posted by broken on February 2, 2005, at 11:09:04

The one you love to hate

I see myself in my own little way
look in the mirror and the demons surround me
I live with pain and torture each day
I hear the voices of the people inside me

They whisper in my ear while they're reading your mind
They tell me all your thoughts and plans about me
I hear your secrets you thought I'd never find
I know the way you really feel about me

I am, the one you love to hate....

Don't try to hide it now it's all very clear
They told me things you thought I never could see
I feel the tension anytime that you're near
And all the things you wish would happen to me

Hell is coming and I saved some for you
All your nightmares will be coming true
I've found my hatred I've been trying to hide
I'm gonna take it for one last ride

I am, the one you love to hate...

Re: One more before I am done

Posted by sunny10 on February 2, 2005, at 12:55:11

In reply to One more before I am done, posted by broken on February 2, 2005, at 11:09:04

the only thing I hope you're done with is hating yourself.

Give yourself permission to love yourself. And no matter what your screen name is, I don't think you're broken.

I think you're lovely.

Re: One more before I am done

Posted by WorryGirl on February 2, 2005, at 15:41:23

In reply to One more before I am done, posted by broken on February 2, 2005, at 11:09:04

I know the feeling, and you very eloquently expressed it.
I often feel that way, too.
For what it's worth, whoever you are, I don't hate you. You are a very priceless soul. Please don't stop the poetry

Re: One more before I am done

Posted by anastasia56 on February 3, 2005, at 0:26:44

In reply to Re: One more before I am done, posted by WorryGirl on February 2, 2005, at 15:41:23

i can relate too. sadly. very well put by you. i'd print it out if i weren't trying so hard to pretend it didn't exist.

ana

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