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Posted by Jai Narayan on November 25, 2004, at 19:09:06
I am howling
my throat vibrating
the pale moon rising
our mountain top fir trees outlined
by the alabaster glow
Jai
Posted by Toph on November 26, 2004, at 14:36:42
In reply to I am howling, posted by Jai Narayan on November 25, 2004, at 19:09:06
Posted by Jai Narayan on November 26, 2004, at 16:34:20
In reply to Re: I am » Jai Narayan, posted by Toph on November 26, 2004, at 14:36:42
Posted by Toph on November 26, 2004, at 18:09:09
In reply to couldn't open it! and I'm ever so curious....:) (nm), posted by Jai Narayan on November 26, 2004, at 16:34:20
It's a site about howling wolves, but I confess that I can't hear the various wolves because my audio card isn't cooperating. Isn't it cool how with the brush strokes of only a few words you paint a picture of a wolf howling at a rising moon and most everyone sees about the same thing in their mind?
Posted by Toph on November 26, 2004, at 18:14:07
In reply to couldn't open it! and I'm ever so curious....:) (nm), posted by Jai Narayan on November 26, 2004, at 16:34:20
Posted by Gabbix2 on November 27, 2004, at 22:22:52
In reply to Re: couldn't open it!, posted by Toph on November 26, 2004, at 18:09:09
you paint a picture of a wolf howling at a rising moon and most everyone sees about the same thing in their mind?
You know what? Until I saw what you'd written that wasn't what I pictured at all. Looking back though, it seems almost impossible.
Posted by Toph on November 29, 2004, at 12:12:08
In reply to Re: couldn't open it! » Toph, posted by Gabbix2 on November 27, 2004, at 22:22:52
> most everyone sees about the same thing
>
I don't know what I was thinking about at the time. Most people don't see anything the way I see things. What did you picture?
Posted by Gabbix2 on November 29, 2004, at 17:20:41
In reply to Howling » Gabbix2, posted by Toph on November 29, 2004, at 12:12:08
Oh I was thinking that it was someone so full of emotion that they were aching to break free of their body, into the sky ya know?
Now, as for Jai's second and third poems in this series, I bet we have the same images...
Posted by Gabbix2 on November 29, 2004, at 18:18:13
In reply to Re: Howling » Toph, posted by Gabbix2 on November 29, 2004, at 17:20:41
what do I know about poetry?
My favorite line is:"Ever since you left me everything tastes like a mayonnaise flavoured soft drink"
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Posted by Jai Narayan on November 29, 2004, at 20:14:58
In reply to Then again.., posted by Gabbix2 on November 29, 2004, at 18:18:13
Posted by Toph on November 30, 2004, at 8:56:50
In reply to Then again.., posted by Gabbix2 on November 29, 2004, at 18:18:13
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