Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 392522

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Another..coz want to write...

Posted by LOOPS on September 19, 2004, at 2:22:02

Here's one I made earlier -

Today was me.
Toiday was complete.
Today was fulfilled.
Today was 3 minutes,
sitting in a shed with you.

Now is pain.
Now is sadness.
Now is outside.
Now is endurance.

Fulfilled in an
opposite sphere of yearning,
my soul already entrenched
in a life
and love with no exit.

The tears continue to fall,
yet I am comforted
that things could have
turned out worse.

Such a huge mistake,
for which there is no remedy.
The truth burns me
and my soul writhes.

Happiness is a word
other people know.

Some mistakes must be paid for,
some take forever as gold.

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