Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 391394

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Haunted

Posted by saw on September 16, 2004, at 3:24:21

Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still can't find what keeps me here
When all this time I've been so hollow inside
I know you're still there

Watching me wanting me
I can feel you pull me down
Fearing you loving you
I won't let you pull me down

Hunting you I can smell you - alive
Your heart pounding in my head

Watching me wanting me
I can feel you pull me down
Saving me raping me
Watching me

Sabrina

Re: Haunted WOW

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 16, 2004, at 14:13:45

In reply to Haunted, posted by saw on September 16, 2004, at 3:24:21

You certainly have carved out a very haunting poem/image. the last few words are a real kicker.
I hope you continue to write and post here.
Jai

Re: Haunted WOW--ditto (nm)

Posted by Angela2 on September 22, 2004, at 19:52:21

In reply to Re: Haunted WOW, posted by Jai Narayan on September 16, 2004, at 14:13:45

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