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Ode to myself

Posted by saw on September 15, 2004, at 2:42:57

Perfect by nature
Icons of self indulgence
Just what we all need
More lies about a world that
Never was and never will be
Have you no shame, don't you see me
You know you've got everybody fooled.

Look, here she comes now
Bow down and stare in wonder
Oh how we lov eyou
No flaws when you're pretending
But now I know she
Never was and never will be
You don't know how you've betrayed me
And somehow you've got everybody fooled.

Without the mask, where will you hide?
Can't find yourself. Lost in your lie.

I know the truth now
I know who you are
And I don't love you anymore.

It never was and never will be
You're not real and you can't save me
Somehow now you're everybody's fool


Sabrina

 

Re: Ode to myself » saw

Posted by partlycloudy on September 15, 2004, at 4:27:07

In reply to Ode to myself, posted by saw on September 15, 2004, at 2:42:57

Sabrina, this is a great piece. I saw myself throughout, too. Thank you for sharing this with me.
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