Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 389824

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Blue Embrace

Posted by malthus on September 11, 2004, at 19:39:43

"Define poetry" you ask
while your blue eyes embrace mine.
Define poetry? Well, since you ask,
It is you.

 

Re: Blue Embrace

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 11, 2004, at 20:02:23

In reply to Blue Embrace, posted by malthus on September 11, 2004, at 19:39:43

So simple, elegant and lovely

 

Re: Blue Embrace » malthus

Posted by Atticus on September 12, 2004, at 18:31:44

In reply to Blue Embrace, posted by malthus on September 11, 2004, at 19:39:43

This is such a sweet poem, as direct and without artifice (but certainly not without art) as the emotions it conveys. It may appear to be simple, but it conveys a great deal; it is the point in a relationship where masks drop away and even a single word can move worlds. I know that feeling, and it brings a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing this. ;) Atticus, all snarky attitude, spiked hair, and steel-toed boots with a secret sentimental streak a mile wide, not unlike the city he lives in


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