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just some rhymes...

Posted by blever on May 30, 2004, at 14:51:16

seething infantile remorse
deluded by your own discourse
deny the sky with all your force
your trampled by the devil's horse

dote on sorrow, choke on tears
infant screams in bleeding ears

gravity will fall
eternal night will howl
nobody can reach you now
the thicket gnarls the more you call

 

Re: just some rhymes... » blever

Posted by LOOPS on May 31, 2004, at 9:46:29

In reply to just some rhymes..., posted by blever on May 30, 2004, at 14:51:16

>Fantastic! I love your words. They really *grind* together.

Loops


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